Editing Activities for Writing a Case Study Report

Below you will find two sentences. How would you edit these sentences for grammar, spelling and referencing conventions?

Sentence 1

According to Shackle states that (1998) displaced aggression is where aggressive action is taken against an innocent person or object and usually occurs when the cause of disappointment is unknown or too powerful to attack (page 20).

How would you edit this sentence?

 

Sentence 2

Sentence 2. Limiting an argument or possibilities to only two alternatives simplistic leading to a view of everything as "cops and robbers, happy or sad, gilty or innocent, yes or no situations. (Jones, S.F. 1990 - Chap. 3 page 156, in Arron)

How would you edit this sentence?

 

Contact for help

If you would like to discuss these examples or want advice on improving your English you can email Pam Mort p.mort@unsw.edu.au.